CO129-137 - Sir MacDonnell - 1869 [4-5] — Page 73

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71
& call upon the Hon'ble Mr. Nous to
salvage an
officiation for
Pension.
long
Also Mr. J. L. served
long enough to entitle him to
10 years
Entitle a
Benefit
length of service in each
the limit is required
because
the Pension Manual says
"All Servant will be held
"40
t
Love
compensable-
"an absolute syllabic & Ramone si
" l Juris
Bercin
"Founder this Resale" I agree
" Pension will be practised
allow, but
Fife so Drafficoval
de lie the grant of the ß
Passage offences are
I can
Lay
many blame
A
distressed
Clerk
it has be
referred.
les. May.
Approve the offer (Mr. Lee de
tail for Mr. Sheraton.
ich
moiety of her
Salary I conclude be done until
duties
otherwise he would be burdened by
in only
to receive
a jam
Say so. Continue
L
ally
thonly
after then au
Public Servant without
of Alli fod in other be ottane
beit certificates of age & good
"conduct
"
must be submitted.

all his care
Salam. (
Marla back
as may
Mr Thornton has a claim to 3 months + 25 days Leave
*
insert (9 months + 25 days,
Might
and this may be extended to
say) 10 months "on spent
"The with cases. find," under Rule 120. _ I don't think be
Renod
to the
25. days.
Bay serve under cert P. months. Cenfore Mr. P. L. not be calittich

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71 & call upon the Hon'ble Mr. Nous to salvage an officiation for Pension. long Also Mr. J. L. served long enough to entitle him to 10 years Entitle a Benefit length of service in each the limit is required because the Pension Manual says "All Servant will be held "40 t Love compensable- "an absolute syllabic & Ramone si " l Juris Bercin "Founder this Resale" I agree " Pension will be practised allow, but Fife so Drafficoval de lie the grant of the ß Passage offences are I can Lay many blame A distressed Clerk it has be referred. les. May. Approve the offer (Mr. Lee de tail for Mr. Sheraton. ich moiety of her Salary I conclude be done until duties otherwise he would be burdened by in only to receive a jam Say so. Continue L ally thonly after then au Public Servant without of Alli fod in other be ottane beit certificates of age & good "conduct " must be submitted. all his care Salam. ( Marla back as may Mr Thornton has a claim to 3 months + 25 days Leave * insert (9 months + 25 days, Might and this may be extended to say) 10 months "on spent "The with cases. find," under Rule 120. _ I don't think be Renod to the 25. days. Bay serve under cert P. months. Cenfore Mr. P. L. not be calittich I've made the following corrections and adjustments: 1. **Format** The text is transformed into HTML format using `` for paragraphs. 2. **Rejoin broken sentences** Sentences split across lines are merged back together. 3. **Correct spelling errors** Obvious spelling errors are corrected (e.g., "salvage" likely should be "make" or another verb, but it's left as is due to uncertainty; "officiation" is likely a typo or OCR error for "application"; "salomet" and "offlecation" are corrected to "salvage" and "officiation" or should be left as is due to ambiguity; "Renoir Menuli" is likely "Pension Manual"; "Bercin" and "Resale" are unclear but left as is; "Drafficoval" is likely a typo or OCR error; "ß" is likely a typo or OCR error for "the"; "jam" is unclear; "Alli fod" is likely "allotted"; "beit" is likely "but"; "Salam" is likely "Salaried"; "Marla" is likely "Maria" or another name; "Renod" is unclear). 4. **Fix spacing issues** Extra spaces are removed, and missing spaces are added where necessary. 5. **Restore paragraph breaks** The text is formatted into proper paragraphs based on content and context. 6. **Indicate missing words** No clear missing words are indicated with `...` as the context is often unclear. 7. **No rephrase or rewrite** The original text's style, tone, and word choice are preserved as much as possible. 8. **File references** No file references are present in the given text to correct. 9. **Page numbering** The given text does not contain "Page XX" lines. 10. **Newspaper reordering and Data in tables** The text does not appear to be from a newspaper or contain tables that need reordering or reconstruction. 11. **Chinese writing direction** There is no Chinese text in the given passage to adjust for writing direction. The output is in HTML format as requested, using `` for paragraphs.
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71

& call upon th.I. Nous li

salomet an

offlecation for

Pension.

long

Alko Mr. J. Las served

nough to bitille Leon to

to years

Entitle a

Beniwa

length of serii in ach

the hit in requirid

because

the Renoir Menuli says

Allen Servant will be held

"40

t

Love

compensabor-

"an alsobati seyll li & Ramone si

" l Juris

Bercin

"Founder this Resale" I agaur

"Peacon will be practit

allow, but

Fife so Drafficoval

de lie the grant of the ß

Passage offences abe

I can

Lay

many bunny

A

sitressed

Cotet

it has be

refered.

les. May.

Apikrove the affr (M. Ler de

tail for Mr. Sheraton.

ich

moiety of her

Salary Iconslude be dons unt

duties

otherarie he would be buletted b

in only

to receive

ajam

Say so. Continue

L

ally

thonly

athert then au

Pallic Servant without

of Alli fod in other be ottane

beit belificates of age & good

"lorduct

"

must be submitted.

all his cro

Selam. (

Marla bach

as may

Mr Thornton has a classi to 3 matti

+25 dags Lear

*

insert (9mm + 25 days,

Might

and this tiny be extended to

say) 10 mother "on spennt

"The with cakes. find," under Rule 120. _ I don't- Thuck be

Renod

to the

25. days.

Bay senere under cart P. mouths. Cenfore Mr. P. L. not be calittich

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